November 21, 2009, 11:43 am

Asking all at AFP for help

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andersonbrent
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As some of you know I write the News in the night forum. I would like your input as to how I can make it better. Any suggestions, comments, or complaints are welcome. Thank you for any help  you can give.


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 I appreciate your style,,, Your reports are in your own words,,, sometimes with a touch of side comments about how you feel.

 Now and then your post photos,,, I wouldn't tweak it too much.

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I don't have time to read it much, but when I used to, I thought you did a great job for the same reason Capt. Jack gave, Brent.


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Thanks for being our ears when we are sleeping. Would you consider posting the news in a "log" form?  List the time of the call and then to the right the content. It is fine now but some might find this style more reader friendly. Keep up the good work. Your post are the first thing I read every morning.

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You do a great job..

News in the night works, as a man, I feel why fix it if, it is not broke..

Captain has it hooked..

I feel your words, your way, our advantage..

teb1954 Idea may help, one long paragraph is hard for me sometimes..

Anyway you post it, I will enjoy the read, news from the night.


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AB,

Agree with all the above. Happy to take your writing however it comes.

 


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AndersonBrent I think you do a great job with the news in the night, thanks for keeping us updated while some of us sleep.


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The fact that you include the time of the call helps me keep track of what I'm reading. I am bad about sleeping with the scanner on and waking up to only hear pieces of calls, so I am thankful to you for your posts. When I wake up I can double-check what I thought I heard.

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My scanner goes off when I go to bed.  Your post and any on scanner news from after when I went to bed is the first two things I read of a morning.  Keep it up.

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Maybe you could stop by and assist the LE's with the pat downs


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Colts Fan wrote:
My scanner goes off  when I go to bedYour post  and any on scanner news from after when I went to bed  is the first  two things I read of a morning.  Keep it up.

Hidden subliminal message..?


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